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Beneath the sun, life is,
beneath the stars, life was,
on it goes, the swirl and blur,
life brings on chaos, wonderment and air.

Beneath the sun, life ended,
beneath the stars, life mended,
down and out, the hurt soul yearns,
realizations made, failure burns.

Beneath the sun, life was good,
beneath the stars, life innocence brood,
continuing with the planetary path,
never stopping, observing orbital math.

Beneath the stars life is great,
beneath the stars life to contemplate.
©2008-2009 ~Honourwolf
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Nice, I like it. This is my favorite line "down and out, the hurt soul yearns, realizations made, failure burns."

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That's beautiful! Great job!

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Eternity."

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